You deserve honest feedback!
I have fifteen years of experience teaching, reading, and critiquing scripts. My own screenplays and films have been selected for festivals including the Cannes Film Festival Short Film Corner, New Filmmakers at Anthology Film Archives, the IFP’s Independent Filmmaker Conference, and as a finalist for the Sundance Institute’s Screenwriter’s Lab. I have an MFA in creative writing from Sarah Lawrence College where I spent two years focusing on fiction structure, conflict, and fiction story analysis. In addition, I’ve worked in the film industry in many roles such as a script supervisor, assistant director, and as an editor where I learned that a great film starts with a great script.
Whether you have just finished a solid, polished draft and need feedback, have a specific problem area in your script that you know needs revamping, want actionable advice, or even just need help in the development stage I can guide you!
How can I help?
I am available for one-on-one consultations.
Choose an option below or let's design a consultation plan to suit your own needs. From full critique and analysis to lessons and exercises, I can help you reach your creative goal and help your script reach full potential. Please contact me for more info and to discuss pricing.
Script Analysis and Critique
I will give a close read of your script and consider plot, conflict, structure, logic, character development and characterization, themes, dialogue, and general format. I’ll tell you what’s working and what’s not. You will get detailed notes via email. Suggestions for revision. ½ hour Skype or Zoom session to discuss your feedback.
We can work from a concept you have or develop one from generative writing. I will guide you through plotting and outlining all the beats of your screenplay. Need something else in your approach to your screenplay? Let's talk!
This choice includes script analysis and critique. Plus, I will dig in, clean up dialogue, clunky action lines, as well as give very specific revision actions.
I offer a free fifteen-minute call/Zoom/Skype to talk about your project and goals and to see if we’re the right fit.
Past and current students will receive a Lifetime 10% discount on any service!
Before you give your script to anyone be sure it is registered with the Writers Guild of America.